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Since mailas wasnt up for the challange ill show my work

PostPosted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 2:37 pm
by .Vault
since mailas is being a homo and wont face me in a grafix battle which me probly would have won... i need some feed back on the boxart i made.

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thanks in advance!

PostPosted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 3:13 pm
by Danopoly
change your title of this post please thx. As for you pic, its very grainy and the word "HALO 3" is not very well cut out. You didnt really work on the chief cause all you did is put in some lighting effects. And the cut out of the chief is not that great either. But if you fix everything ive mentioned above, this pic will own! Good job by the way.
Even if you dont fix it, i think this pic will beat mailas's anytime.

PostPosted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 3:25 pm
by Jay-Jay
Technical: 6
Originality: 4
Quality: 7
Sub Total: 17
Title of your Post: -10
Grand Total: 7

PostPosted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 3:44 pm
by .Vault
danopoly wrote:change your title of this post please thx. As for you pic, its very grainy and the word "HALO 3" is not very well cut out. You didnt really work on the chief cause all you did is put in some lighting effects. And the cut out of the chief is not that great either. But if you fix everything ive mentioned above, this pic will own! Good job by the way.
Even if you dont fix it, i think this pic will beat mailas's anytime.


wow thanks for some great comments... first of all i made that halo 3 with downloading the font off of 1001fonts.com and didnt cut anything. i just used a inner glow to show a shiney effect! :wink:

and jay jay... who grades the title of the post???

and for anyone who hasnt looked carefully the guy at the bottom right has active camo... :wink: dont miss him!

PostPosted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 4:44 pm
by manh
the guy at the bottom doesnt look like he has on camo. Looks more like OVERLAY to me :lol: hahahahaha.

PostPosted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 5:32 pm
by .Vault
manh wrote:the guy at the bottom doesnt look like he has on camo. Looks more like OVERLAY to me :lol: hahahahaha.
i just did a color dodge to that guy and it came out that way... :roll:

PostPosted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 5:40 pm
by Jay-Jay
StK PYRO wrote:and jay jay... who grades the title of the post???

I guess I do. It was a low blow. So I felt like rating that also.. Glad the title was changed... no need for that around here.. keep in mind that newbies will see that and may get discouraged to participate here.. since they think that is "what commonly goes around here in this forum".

PostPosted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 6:01 pm
by .Vault
yea... im guess im sorry too... o well all is done and i am changing it again

EDIT: any more critiques?!